Poetry Review: “Crossing the Sea of Shattered Glass” by Robert Bunn

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Rating: 5 stars

Headline: A beautifully titled work which celebrates the thrill of life’s ups and downs

Review:

Penned by fantasy author, turned poet, R.B. Bunn, Crossing the Sea of Shattered Glass is a poetry collection that brings together all of life’s highs and lows to the forefront in drama and style. Coming in at just under eighty pages, Crossing the Sea of Shattered Glass touches on powerfully emotive themes including family, loss and rebirth, whilst also drawing heavily on emotive landscapes and dramatic storytelling. Split into three distinct sections: Disembark, Storms at Sea and Landfall, personal highlights from this collection include the poems “The Helper”, “Sorrow was her Crown” and “The Fishing Rod”.

Dripping in raw emotion, Crossing the Sea of Shattered Glass is also home to a wide variety of poetic forms, from traditional four line rhyming stanzas, to a page of pacey two line stanzas, right through to concrete poems (such as “The Bottle” which is formatted / shaped on the page as its namesake). The use of concrete poems alone is such a rarity in poetry collections like these, and Bunn’s inclusion of them here is a welcome sight in amongst the storytelling of light and dark.

With a gorgeous cover design and a beautiful title to boot, it is hard to not want to read this book over and over again, knowing that each time there will be something new for readers to reflect on. While it is worth noting the book includes themes such as substance abuse and alcoholism, the author does include this advisory at the start of the collection. These topics represent a strong backbone of Bunn’s work here, however in many places the content is weaved in such a way that it is not as hard hitting as it could have so easily been. In this regard it manages to tread a fine line with skill and grace.

Crossing the Sea of Shattered Glass has to be one of the top poetry reads of this summer. Brilliantly executed, it is by all accounts a five star read.

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Jus-Rol will not get the hint on their cinnamon swirls / rolls

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Remember how back in 2023 I have a review on the hideous experience Boyfriend Ben and I had while inadvertently trying out the “new recipe” formula of Jus-Rol’s cinnamon swirls? Titled What is going on with Jus-Rol’s cinnamon swirls? Yep, that one.

Well, now it feels like both Jus-Rol and Hello Fresh are out to taunt me. How? By sending me promotional material of a product I badly want to love but categorially detest (on account of the hideous move to separate pastry and filling, whereas before the mix came pre-made, so all the consumer had to do was cut the cylinder of pastry and bake).

Basically, Jus-Rol’s cinnamon swirls are a bad ex that radically changed one day and still wants me to love them. I can’t, I just can’t.

Jus-Rol has also published a how-to guide on YouTube which in my mind says it all in terms of how ‘easy’ the new method is to consumers.

I’m not stating anything as fact, just observing that behind every corporate how-to video is a mountain of calls to customer services to say “wtf?”

By the way, I notice Jus-Rol have also tried to get around the new recipe hate by changing the baby poop paste to sugar that looks like beach sand. A reminder of what the paste looked like when Ben and I tried it out for ourselves:

Call me lazy, but even moving to sugar represents a Jus-Rol’s commitment to drive down production costs at the expense of giving consumers with an inferior product. They need to listen to their markets. Although I am half tempted to compare the two now.

“…Ben!”

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Book Review: “Patches” by Dana Manoli

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Rating: 3 stars

Headline: Set in Romania, this interesting collection of stories is held back by its numerous grammatical errors

Review:

Written by author Dana Manoli, Patches is a cross-generational novel set in Romania spanning circa several hundred years. Following the lives of six women, the novel is comprised of six short stories (or “books”) which follows the plights of its female protagonists as each fight’s to reshape their destiny against a backdrop of cultural resistance. From Katarina, who is running away from a forced marriage to Dafina, a teacher treading a fine line with administering education in a multicultural school, the stories aim to challenge readers on any assumption that society has become more liberal over time. As Manoli notions, “does modern tolerance overcome past prejudices, or are we just reshaping old injustices?”

Patches is a pleasant read, with a nice use of mediums to influence the style and personality of each. Dafina’s story makes use of back-and-forth letters and Ada’s is entirely told through diary entries. This helps prevent the tales from feeling repetitive or undistinguishable. There are some great turns of phrase to be discovered in this collection of short stories, including a personal favourite, “Dafina’s voice is dry as her mother’s medicinal herbs.” The six short stories are broken up into chapters (meaning that no story is ever more than about fifty pages in length). For Eilna (number three), the story opens with “chapter nine”. Given each story is standalone, it might have made more sense to start each “book” with chapter one. For the most part all the stories are set in the present tense (more on this point to follow).

Where this book holds itself back is in its grammar. Patches is the first book this Romanian author has written in the English language which, outside of this book review, needs to be acknowledged. Manoli’s ability to write something of this standard in a second language is a challenge that few native English speakers would attempt to take on. That said, it would be wrong to consider this in isolation when it ultimately this a book aimed at an English-reading audience, battling alongside other historical novels of its type. With this in mind, the grammar is off in places, with the tenses slipping into past, incorrect use of semicolons and turns of phrase that do not quite make sense (yet might do for Romanian readers). The best way to rectify these would be to employ the use of a professional copy/line editor who is a native English speaker.

Patches is a solid book with layered meaning and merit to its strong cast of female characters. A good starting point for any future publications penned in English, a personal recommendation would be to locate beta readers or a proficient editor. This has the potential to be a five star read, yet ultimately is only hampered by the number of small grammatical errors which add friction to the reading journey.

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If (cat) looks could terrify

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Mum and Dad’s new cat, Jim, is definitely not okay with my existence, as shown by this picture.

(Before you worry too much about Jim, just bear in mind this is also the same cat who will see anything as a challenge, even an ironing board.)

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Book Review: “Until I Came Home: A Sunset’s Journal” by Russell Earle

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Rating: 5 stars

Headline: Until I Came Home is a must for anyone planning to explore South America by backpack

Review:

Penned by South Caroline State University graduate, now Computer Scientist, Russell J. Earle Jr., Until I Came Home: A Sunset’s Journal is a memoir made for any reader looking for their next 300 page adventure hit.

The memoir makes the clever approach of starting at the end, with the author reflecting on his tatty shoes, overgrown hair and the flags snitched onto the top part of his book bag as the proud mementos of all the countries he has visited in South America. Almost battle weary, he is ready to return to his home in North America. For the readers it then becomes all the more interesting to see how the narrator has got to such a position. From this scene the book snaps straight back into the past, where Earle is spending his evenings researching ways to tell his boss he is quitting his job to travel around the southern continent.

Following this interesting hook of an opener, Until I Came Home takes readers through the journeys and experiences Earle has while making his way through a multitude of different cultures including Venezuela, Columbia and Peru. Dealing with the expected language barrier is just the start of his challenges! Readers can expect to see, live and feel a multitude of different locations and characters, including the highs and lows. All this, and in such vivid detail as if they were walking alongside the author every step of the way.

It is very hard to find fault with this book, the writing quality and pacing for a travel memoir of its type is executed very well, by an author with all the skills and background in creative writing. The fact that Earle is not afraid to shy away from conveying the challenges he faced (such as breaking news to his family of his desire to travel and conversely his relief to be returning home at the end of the experience), it all adds up to show the measure and breadth of the author himself. A complex character that grows, changes and adapts to the real-world situations he is placed in. The cover is absolutely gorgeous and sets the tone perfectly for what is to follow.

A must for anyone planning to following in the author’s footsteps and explore South America by backpack, Until I Came Home is a great piece of travel writing and one that makes for a thoroughly enjoyable read, cover to cover. Five stars, simple as.

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There is a place in the world called “Farty” and I am so here for it

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Don’t ask me how, don’t ask me why but the other day I discovered there is a place in the world called Fartygsholmen and in the moment it completely made my evening.

According to Google Maps, Fartygsholmen (or, as I like to shorten it to, “Farty”) is an island off the coast of Finland . Quoting the great Wikipedia:

“The island is located about 17 kilometres southwest of Kotka and about 97 kilometres east of Helsinki. The island covers an area of 0.4 hectares and its maximum length is 90 metres in a southeast-northwest direction.”

Credit: Wikipedia

The icing on the cake? The extremes of the two Google reviews, one of which reads (translated) “A good place to take a break from loved ones” and the other, “HAHA Farty”.

Credit: Google Maps

It’s the little things.

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Book Review: “Everwoven: A Memoir. A Reckoning” by Megan Margherio

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This article was produced following a request from the author to write a fair and honest review for their book.

Rating: 4 stars

Headline: A heartfelt memoir of resilience and transformation, “Everwoven” speaks to readers with delicate poise and consideration

Review:

Penned by debut author Megan Margherio, Everwoven: A Memoir. A Reckoning (hereafter Everwoven) is a first person account of the author’s life, from her formative years, through to her thirties. Blending the genres of memoir and creative storytelling, Margherio states the intention of her work succinctly in her opening introduction. “Everything you read [in Everwoven] is my truth, my reclamation,” she says, “but I intentionally crafted this story to allow you to feel, rather than simply observe, what happened.”

Beginning in a small American Midwestern town of circa 55 people, the opening chapters of Everwoven makes for what is, at points, a heart breaking read of a child recounting alleged abused at the hands of those she trusted most. It is a saddening tale only deepened by the author’s realisation some years later that the family’s main source of income came from running a puppy farm. From here, the narrative moves onto first jobs, careers in the hospital Emergency Room (ER), and the many forms of love, including loss and heartbreak. This, before eventually detailing the author’s rebirth and her optimism in what lies ahead.

The memoir is structured differently to many titles in this genre of non-fiction, in that there are conventional sections where the author recounts her life growing up, paired with sections where the author interacts with younger versions of herself in the third person. The below example from page 14 demonstrates how this plays out within the context of the memoir:

“Are you there, Little Me?” I hold my breath, hoping.
Silence.
But I feel her. I know she’s there, hovering just beyond my awareness.
Watching.
“I know you’re there. The air thickens when you’re near. I can hear
your breath—small, quiet, waiting.”
[…]
A whisper. Sharp. Skeptical. “You always say that.”

It is certainly a different approach to writing a memoir and for some it might take a chapter or two to get into the swing of it. Sections like these alter the tempo and tone of voice from something very direct and factual, to something more softly spoken (and, dare I say it, novel-ish in approach).

Coming in at 377 pages, cover to cover, Everwoven is a book best absorbed in chunks, especially given some of the challenging themes it tackles head-on. As memoirs go Everwoven is by no means an easy read and, to some, the darkened content might be a bridge too far. However for those who take heart in a memoir filled with sparks of joy and uplift, there is much to be commended here.

While there are always two sides to every story, Margherio’s characterisation of the significant people in her life allows a deeper understanding and connection to the figures in the author’s life, including those of her younger self. With this, Margherio has been able to perform something striking, transforming the bitter bile of the past into the sweetened honey of hope.

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The Writers College Prize

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A little bit of writing news. Out of nearly 700 entrants to The Writers College prize (based in New Zealand), I’m thrilled to have gotten honours for my Soviet-era short story, “Laika”.

Full list of winners can be found here.

While this does not count as a prize-winning or placed story, it is a bit of positive feedback (and that is never a bad thing).

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Poetry Review: “2 AM: Thoughts in the Quiet After” by Lianna Peryer

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Rating: 4 stars

Headline: Penned with cutting raw emotion, Peryer’s collection explores themes of lust and loss with maximum impact

Review:

Penned by York psychology graduate, now Norfolk-based writer, Lianna Peryer, 2 Am: Thoughts in the Quiet After is a poetry and prose collection with a heavy focus on themes of lust, loss and learning. Over this collection’s 55 pages, Peryer explores the emotional fallout in the wake of traumatic events, utilising different poetic forms and sections of prose to try and make sense of the world around her. It is a collection that delves into some difficult and, at times, troubling content, and feels very true to brand for an author who simultaneously enjoys the darkness of true crime alongside the fun and joy of baking.

While this collection contains a trigger warning at the end of the book, it is worth noting that 2 Am: Thoughts in the Quiet After explores themes including that of depression, anxiety and eating disorders to name but three of the seven self-identified by the author. This list may have been better placed at the start of the book, before the first poem commences, however at least the author has the self-awareness to note them for her readers.

Personal highlights of Peryer’s work within this collection include “Shattered Art”, “The Sparrow” and “The Quiet Truth of Death in the ICU”. Personal highlights may the wrong term, given the bitter sweet and dark nature often contained in Peryer’s work, but these three struck a cord for their observational commentary on life, living and death.

Regardless of personal preference, the writing quality across every poem and section o prose is of a high standard and succeeds in its ability to draw the reader in to the worldbuilding and storytelling of Peryer’s lived experiences. It marries perfectly with the simple line drawn cover design, an image that lures readers in with a sense of security, maybe even seduction, to deliver a sucker-punch of raw emotion. A bit more light in a predominantly dark collection would have been a welcome addition, however sometimes that is easier said than done and maybe something that will be reflection in any subsequent publications Peryer turns to.

Turning to the pen to regain control of one’s mental health and make sense of traumatic events is not something many would dare approach, yet Peryer has more than succeeded in the publication of this collection. Cover to cover, 2 Am: Thoughts in the Quiet After oozes in raw and unashamedly gritty emotion, a unique skillset that is so rarely mastered by writers, let alone poets. As a British reader, reviewing a British-penned collection, it is a privilege to have been given a glimpse into Peryer’s life and growth.

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Book Review: “Keeping the Countess” by Lille Moore

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Rating: 4 stars

Headline: Moore’s debut novel blends historical fiction, romance and mystery effortlessly

Review:

The debut publication from Texan-based author Lille Moore, Keeping the Countess blends the best of multiple writing genres, Historical Fiction, Romance with a strong thread of Mystery weaving the story altogether.

Set in Cumbria (England) in 1878, the story is very reminiscent to that of Jane Eyre by Charlotte Brontë, with a switch in gender for the leading roles. When the Rochford estate faces financial jeopardy on account of the vices of Lord Rochford, Lady Faith Rochford steps in to try and save the future of the estate by securing tuition for the Lord’s sole legitimate son, Adam. The seemingly pious Reverend Jonah Sinclair was not her first choice of teacher, but with money in limited supply and a child who is intended for the hights of higher education, Jonah will have to do.

It is not just the human owners who have their cracks. Despite first appearances Jonah’s new home, the once grand Ravenglass Hall, is harbouring many secrets of its own. While teaching the young heir, Jonah is also embarking on a secret quest of his own, to track down the person who murdered his father and bring them to justice. As Faith and Jonah find themselves drifting closer and closer together, it would seem their forbidden love is not the only secret at risk of breaking free.

This 331 page novel centres around its two protagonists, their blossoming relationship and Jonah’s quest to find answers to his father’s murder. This hits all the beats of a classic nineteenth century gothic novel, complete with its characters who all have their faults and chips on their shoulder. This sits nicely along the dramatic scene setting and the moody climate of Cumbria.

As far as storylines go, Keeping the Countess personally feels a bit too close to Jane Eyre. The idea of forbidden love between an upper-class Lady and a lower-class figure being brought in to educate the child of said faulted aristocracy (who also live in a crumbling estate) is not a particularly new idea, be it a gender-switch. While the mystery subplot provides interest and intrigue, the originally can feel a little overshadowed at times.

As a piece of historical romance, Keeping the Countess ticks many boxes of a successful publication. The writing is of a strong standard and the cover attractively designed for the story and audience it is targeting. Given this is currently listed online as book 1 of the “Damsels in Disguise” series, it will be very interesting to see where Moore goes next with her writing career.

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