Rating: 3 stars
Headline: There were too many short stories in “The Adventures of Nanna Willowspell” for me to get behind the central character
Review:
The Adventures of Nanna Willowspell is a children’s book by author Keele Fishel. Set across multiple enchanting settings, it follows the various short tales and adventures, recounted by the protagonist Nanna Willowspell to a group of children who have gathered to hear her stories. The pacing of this book is driven by these short stories, most lasting no more than a page or two in length, with limited plot outside these stories, which for parents could make this a good read aloud book for much younger children.
While the stories in this book are pleasant enough to read, the basis that all the stories are hyper short in length and unrelated to each other (or the world in which Nanna Willowspell is recounting them) makes the book feel a bit bitty in places. You start getting into a story only to be yanked out of it again. The scene-setting also feels somewhat lacking as a result of the shortness of the stories and the dialogue is limited by the narration of the stories being conveyed in a memory form. While granted, it gives a homely feeling of an older relative recounting an experience, it does remove the development and personality of the secondary characters, however fleeting their appearances might be.
A smaller points on the book’s formatting, where the use of the story’s title at the top of each page in varying font sizes does lend to confusion, it gives the feeling that a new story is starting on each fresh page when in reality it is not always the case. The margins are also too narrow, something which may have been a formatting choice to reduce page count and potential printing costs but it makes the amount of text feel blocky and a tad bit overwhelming.
Based on several hints dotted toward the end of the book, it would seem Fishel is planning to turn The Adventures of Nanna Willowspell into a series for younger audiences. While I love the magical and fantastical elements of this book, in any subsequent books I would prefer it if there was more focus on lengthening the short stories or focusing on the overarching plot of Nanna Willowspell in the hear and now. In simple terms, less is more.
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Links:
Reedsy Discovery Review: AEB Reviews – “The Adventures of Nanna Willowspell” by Keele Fishel
Purchase Link: “The Adventures of Nanna Willowspell” by Keele Fishel (Amazon)
Author Website: Nanna Willowspell
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