Rating: 3 stars
Headline: To Help Just One demonstrates courage in its ability to speak up about sensitive topics many authors shy away from
Review:
To Help Just One is the debut release from Australian author Thusitha L. Perera, who turned to storytelling while recovering from the long term effects of Covid-19. The book follows the intersecting stories of Lawrence, Jonathan and Tegan, three childhood friends who have grown up to become work colleagues and exercise buddies. Going through their various challenges in life, we get to see how each character navigates mental health issues, including themes around gambling addiction and workplace bullying. On occasion the tone might be triggering for those sensitive to these topics, however overall this is a story of personal resilience and triumph and the importance of supportive networks. If this book could be described in one mantra it would be “it’s always okay to not be okay”.
Despite some of the thorny issues presented in the book, To Help Just One has a nice feel about it, it flows well and each character has a coherent story arc that reaches a satisfactory conclusion. It is very prose heavy, dialogue is deployed on a minimalistic level compared to what would normally be seen in this type of fiction. Personally, I was a bit on the fence with whether I liked the approach, as at points it did encourage me to skip segments knowing that what would follow would be a page of internal reflection with little action.
The biggest hold-back to the writing comes from not heeding the age old writing wisdom of “show don’t tell”. Perera states things a bit too often that it tends to give the feeling of being spoon-fed a story. “Tegan is excited”, “Tegan marvels at the range of skills”, “[Tegan] considers what adding another string to her bow would look like”, “Tegan likes the idea of coaching” (and this is just on page seventy). While it is not a crime to shed a light on areas readers cannot see, when lots of successive paragraphs open the same way the format can become repetitive. What is lacking is the subtle depth that allows readers to flesh out details for themselves, without being directed by the author.
This is a book I am glad to have read, not least for its courage to speak up about some of the hot topics many authors shy away from. To Help Just One has strong foundations as a author debut and I look forward to seeing where Perera takes his writing career next.
AEB Reviews
Links:
Reedsy Discovery Review: AEB Reviews – “To Help Just One” by Thusitha L. Perera
Purchase Link: “To Help Just One” by Thusitha L. Perera (Amazon)
Author Website: https://fromthedeskoftlperera.com/
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